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Post by galaxina on Jan 2, 2008 1:35:12 GMT
Yeah, I see your points. Also do you like How in it, Molly was brought back as a computerized version of her memory? I liked Molly and decided to do that with her. I got her revival off of both Aelida from Code lyoko and Cortana from Halo. In fact "digital Molly" as she is now called, in her holgraphic form she presents herself in, wears the exact same outfit as Cortana does and has the same glow as well (though it is green and not purple).
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jan 2, 2008 1:54:23 GMT
Creative. You know what's odd? Authors are always "stealing" from eachother. Even the famous ones, like Tolkein and Rowling, have stolen something from here and there.
Shakespeare was probably the most infamous "theif" though.
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Post by galaxina on Jan 2, 2008 2:05:39 GMT
I stole a lot off stuff for this, in fact get a load of this.
Cyborg Rouge in this story was based off of both the bionic woman and six million dollar man.
Asher's mech is based off of Shining Gundam from G gundam
Crysanthemum's mech, Karnage, is based off of an Evangelion EVA unit
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jan 2, 2008 2:21:36 GMT
I have never heard of any of the stuff that you took your things from.
But hey, no one realized that the name Hermione was stolen either... even if the source was Shakespeare...
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Post by galaxina on Jan 2, 2008 2:28:05 GMT
Well part 22 will be coming soon, I hope.
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Post by galaxina on Jan 10, 2008 22:39:55 GMT
Oh in case any of you haven't noticed, I made this Fanfic quite serious but still funny at times. One example of this, is that instead of the metarex merely popping up and not really killing too many people like they did in Season 3 (which this story continues on from a year after that ended), they have started an all out war. GUN, the Cascadians, the Marmolinians have made entire armies to fight back, and the Metarex are hitting at full force now. Also there is much more violence, but not too much blood.
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jan 11, 2008 5:35:58 GMT
I'll look forward to Part 22. I hope Megafan and Vikatta all take notes on how you write. THey need to.
But what is the final part? When does it end?
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Post by galaxina on Jan 11, 2008 13:50:00 GMT
That even I don't know? I am sort of making up the story as I go, but still keeping things in line. I also use actual stuff from the original show if you haven't noticed.
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Post by ~Megan~ on Jan 30, 2008 20:33:19 GMT
Well... r u going to continue or not?
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Post by Charmander on Feb 11, 2008 3:15:34 GMT
You know, when will I see the first episode of this fic on newgrounds? Surely you can at least work really hard on finishing the first episode in a decent time.
There's already a pretty good flash on Newgrounds that centers around Tails, Cosmo, and Cream (A humorous love triangle.) Have you seen it?
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Post by galaxina on Aug 17, 2008 3:15:27 GMT
I know it has been a while, but here is part 22 finally.
Part 22
Aboard the blue typhoon 2, Tails was hard at work. He had seen something cool in the group nowadays. Ever since he integrated some of his friends wiht Cosmo's DNA, they had been overusing it lately. it was almost normal of them to eat each other and then grow back with water or squish themselves up. He then went to Rouge and gave her a daily systems check. He did this every day to make sure that her new cyborg body didn't fail and that she could survive. After that, he upgraded his old Tails blaster, a weapon he used during emerl's time. it could shoot rapid fire blasts now. After that, he swithced off the atuopilot on the ship and went to look for Chris and Shadow, he thought he might need them.
Elsewhere, Chuck thorndyk, Chris's grandpa was out for a walk. He had heard about the Metarex attacks in Westopolis, but was still happy that it was still peaceful at Station square. He wondered what it would be like when they reached his city, when suddenly, something broke the peace. The Eggman robot, now working for the metarex, Metalsonic, flew down and stood in front of him
Metalsonic gazed at him with his electronic eyes and said "Hello Chuck, it's been a while. I'm now with the Metarex, and I know your grandson has done a lot to them that we don't like. Now his whole family must suffer for it, including you!"
Chuck backed away and asked in fear, "I never did anything, and I will do anything to repay you Mr Metal Sonic!"
Metalsonic then yelled, "howabout changing things so that the previous time the Metarex won, I bet you can't do that!" Then Metalsonic used his nanite body to morph his arm into a sharp blade. He drew it and said, "but there is one thing I will give you, a 10 second head start."
Chuck tried to reason with him, but Metalsonic kept counting down from ten. Frightened, he then turned tail and ran for his life. But he underestimated Metalsonic's speed, for after he counted zero, he fired up his rockets and jetted after him. Right while he was running, Chuck was stabbed in the back by Metalsonic. As he fell to his knees bleeding, Metalsonic said "Goodnight Chuck" and watched as he died. After that he signaled dark Oak that Chuck Thorndyk was dead, and then he went out to go look for and murder the rest of Chris's family, with Chris being the prime target.
end of Part 22
Part 23 coming later
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Post by ll Mashiro ll on Aug 17, 2008 16:30:48 GMT
This is getting very very weird
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Post by galaxina on Aug 17, 2008 22:36:03 GMT
This is getting very very weird Exactly how is this fanfic wierd, must I say?
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Post by galaxina on Feb 19, 2009 13:11:07 GMT
Okay guys, I know it has been a while, but here is part 23 already.
Part 23
Aboard the GUN cruiser, Dandelion, Weed, Topaz, the Commander, and many other troopers sat in wait for deployment. Thye had just heard reports that the ARK had fallen under enemy hands, but there was nothing they could do about that now. At last, Westopolis had appeared, they rushed towardsthe ramp and prepared for battle. To thier horror, they saw something quite awful as they left the ship.
In front of them stood a horrible scenery of what had been happening at Westopolis form Metarex attacks. Buildings were damaged and ripped apart. Many vehicles were flipped over and some were on fire. Multiple bodies of people slain by Metarex forces lay, giving off a remnant of what was going on. Topaz stood motionless, she had never seen carnage like this before.
"Its Awful," she uttered.
Weed Answered, "I know, this is what the Metarex do. They slaughter many innocent inhabitants, just because they despise all non-plant life."
Just as they were standing, a GUN trooper jumped out of the way from a huge hit. A burly Metarex called a goliath had come up from behind and had almost crushed him with its shield arm. The Soldiers tried firing at it, but thier weapons didn't seem to do much harm.
Dandelion yelled "you are doing it all wrong, aim for its joints!"
They then now focused thier bullets towards its red joints, which now was having more of an effect. While it was weakened, Weed ran up and gave it a stab in the back, finishing the Metarex. Just aftert that one went down though, more came. Hundreds of foot Soldiers and the Gargoyle/snake like nagas jumped out from cover points with rifles ablazing. The toehr GUN troopers took cover behind some set up sandbags and fired back. Shadow ran outwards and managed to knock one off its skimmer bike, which he then used to hit-and-run more. Weed jumped on the rooftops now clutching a USP compact pistol and his katana swords came to help. More GUN troopers kept shooting, and the Commander helped as much as he could as he saw many of his men getting shot and harmed so much. Just then as Dandelion was sniping them with a Barett M82, Topaz walked in on a massive B3X hotshot mech. "You want a little lift, I got one just for you!" Dandelion accepted and hopped aboard while Topaz went to battle. Then a sporadic attack from Metarex Vihar ships came overhead. They went and dropped bombshells at her. It almost looked like they'd hit, but Commander tossed a forcefield grenade and protected her. Right after the ships passed, she unloaded two heat seeking missiles at the ships and blew two out of the sky.
Meanwhile, Weed was on the rooftops picking them off. He managed to impale one on a turret and take the turret for himself. Ding so allowed him to give cover fire to the Soldiers. He saw them as many were fighting back, takeing a few surviving civilians out of the city, and even losing thier lives. Right then, a metarex fired a rocket at him. He managed to jump out of the way before it totalled his turret. As he landed on the street, A soldier pulled up to him in a Massive beetle-like tank called a Hercules Tank. He decided to hop aboard the left turret and pump more of these metarex full of lead. As he did, he watched as Asher in her mech fly overhead and deal with the larger ships hovering in the sky.
Just when Dandelion was having fun taking out Metarex in her hotshot, a massive shot came out of nowhere and heavily damaged its leg. She hopped out to see what had fired it. I was a Massive green frog-like metarex she had seen before attack planets like Secco called an Amphibitron! The amphibitron crouched near her and let out a massvie cry, kind of a like a cross between a croak and a roar. Then she saw Weed on the tank and jumped on the other side turret.
Dandelion yelled to him "Weed, its an Amphibitron! what are we going to do!"
Weed replied, "We fight it back, you remeber its vulnerable spots don't you? The bigger they are, the harder they fall!"
Dandelion got set and started pulling back. She radioed the Hercules pilot to fire the mortar cannon at the orb on its forehead. He took note of that and concentrated fire. The Amphibitron kept leaping towards them fast, and then firing enenrgy blasts from its mouth. The pilot kept swerving out of the way, but then one hit and partially damaged the hull. Weed kept on firing and soon, the orb on its forehad exploded. The Amphibitron made its cry in agony and jumped away.
"Keep an eye out" Weed exclaimed, "He still might be there!"
Then quickly, the massive Metarex frog lashed out its tongue and grabbed Dandelion. She tried to struggle free, but its grip was too strong and it was trying to pull her off the turret on the tank. Weed swiftly stabbed it in the tongue, causing it to let go. Next they began shooting at the orb on its left shoulder spike. This one was smaller and took less time. They quckly destroyed that one and made it move back.After that was the one on the right shoulder spike. While they were firing, it got up close and revelaed its retractable spikes on its chest. It then would've crushed them if it weren't for the pilot's nice driving. He then fired a mortar shell at the rob and that one expolded, harming it even more.
Dandelion cheered "thats it, now go for its eyes!"
The Pilot told her "I can't now, I'm out of shells!"
She then answered "Well I suppose me and Weed will have to finish this fight ourselves!"
They then kept firing at its eyes while it was in pain. Pretty soon they blew up both its eyes and that was enough to bring down the massive Metarex frog. It let out another croak-roar and fell to the ground with a loud "THUD!"
Topaz came by as another GUN ship landed before them. "Nice work you two," she said "you brought down that toad thing all by yourselves!"
Weed and Dandelion both told her "well we told you we are experience from before at fighting metarex."
Topaz then said "well we have to get aboard now. GUN now has to nuke the city now that we found all the survivors. I know it is not that right, but the Commander order it done. Now hop aboard!"
Dandelion, Weed, and Topaz jumped on the ship and it lefted off and flew back to base. They saw the commander on board and Ashers mech trailing behind them. He then watched as another ship flew above the city and dropped the nuke. Then, the whole city, and all the Metarex there were gone in a giant mushroom cloud.
The Commander sat in his seat on the ship and another trooper came to him "Private, status on the attack on Westopolis" he asked.
The trooper told him "We had quite a many losses, but we still one. The Metarex armies there were destroyed, but we suffered 42 casualties and 79 wounded. Out of the wounded, 11 are beyond our capabilites to treat. We evacuated about 17 civilians, the rest were confirmed dead."
Commander sat back and said "Well I am glad we won and got some people safely out. But I doubt we would've won if it weren't for out new recruits, Dandelion, Weed, and Asher. But we still can't rest, for the war is far from over!"
End of part 23
Hopefully Part 24 won't be long
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Post by galaxina on Mar 5, 2009 12:44:08 GMT
I also wanted to tell you that the fanfic is not going to be over for quite a while. Also I haven't made a new part for like months because I have been working on the Flash movie form of it. When the flash movie form is done, I will show you all it and quite possibly it will be much better than the story form.
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