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Post by selina on Jun 22, 2007 23:04:12 GMT
I see, so I will stop thinking so much about it. So far I wanted Damathasar to be powered up in order to be stronger than Henassis and Raccar. I also say that Rouge is now the "Bunnie Rabbot" of the crew now since she is a cyborg. I might also have Eggman be introduced in the story and have him fighting off the Metarex with his army of Egg pawns. These are the Ideas I have thought up so far, I just don't know which one to choose. Maybe I will post all of them, but maybe not. As for now I will keep thinking for the sake of Seedrians, the encounter.
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Post by selina on Jun 23, 2007 1:38:51 GMT
I almost forgot, Rouge also has a Visor now to scan things and use Heat Vision and interchangeable arms so that she can take off her arm and change it to another such as her flamethrower arm, Sound cannon arm, shredder arm, hammer arm, and just to help Cosmo and her sisters and Tails and Cream and Amy out, a molding machine arm that Rouge uses her mind to direct it what to mold Cosmo and the others into. She can still eat things because tails gave her an artificial stomach so she can give her head some nutrients, however she cannot reproduce now that her reproductive organs are long gone.
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Post by Olivia on Jun 25, 2007 0:33:58 GMT
One does not need a heart to love, only a brain. Of course, without a brain, you can't feel at all, not even with a metallic replacement. Feelings cannot be created by anything but by nature itself.
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jun 25, 2007 3:33:16 GMT
There are worse things than the loss of the body, or reproductive organs for that matter. The loss of the soul is perhaps the worst thing that cna happen, but I think the worst thing of all is the loss of the ability to feel and love. Wihtout love, infants die, and even grown people cannot live if they cannot love. Fortunately, Rouge can still love, else I'd feel more remore for her.
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Post by selina on Jun 25, 2007 13:56:25 GMT
Rouge can still love as I said earlier, and she still has a soul in this metal body. She also stands a better chance against the Metarex. So far all three crew are on a search for the Chaos Emeralds which will help them on their quest to defeat the Metarex again. The Ultimate Seedrians have one, Tails and Cosmo's crew has one, Dandelion and Weed's crew have one, and the Metarex have one, and the other three are still being found. The Ultimate Seedrians have the most use for them since they are able to use powers such as Chaos Control and Chaos Blast.
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Post by selina on Jun 26, 2007 23:43:30 GMT
Oh and did I mention, Damathasar will get powered up by the scientists who made her into a more powerful being. Also the Prototypes of the Ultimate Seedrinas will be released to fight.
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Post by selina on Jun 27, 2007 22:11:41 GMT
The Crews may come together in a way such as the rebuilt Blue Typhoon meets up with Asher's mech and they find out they are on thier side
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jun 28, 2007 1:36:37 GMT
Whatever event comes, make sure to remember to contine to construct your characters and plot. Character development in a story should continue until the character dies, or the story ends. same for the plot. While you're working on the next part, I've been working on my own fan-fic, so I hope you like it.
Going back to the characters, as they gain "experience" (As they go through several events) you should then also change the way they interact. For example, perhaps if a romantic idea popped in Comso's head, but it didn't go very well, how would Tails react? Just something to think about, as for it is one of the great differences between great stories and merely decent stories.
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Post by selina on Jun 29, 2007 0:44:06 GMT
So what do you think of the Ultiamte Seedrians in this Fanfic?
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Post by Olivia on Jun 29, 2007 1:01:03 GMT
They are interesting, that's for sure.
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jun 29, 2007 1:02:25 GMT
Agreed, but they could have been used better.
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Post by selina on Jun 29, 2007 1:12:31 GMT
What about Dandelion and Weed, they started the story and now are with asher who has a giant mech
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jul 2, 2007 1:07:32 GMT
Well, they seem interesting, but I still stand by my first verdict. The Ultimate Seedrians remind of another Cosmo story in which Cosmo was cloned over and over agian. They both are good stories.
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Post by selina on Jul 2, 2007 1:51:26 GMT
You didn't tell me what you think of Asher, Dadelion and weed. I actually based them off of Shadow, get it, Ultimate Seedrians, Ultimate Life form
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Post by §Tsunami§ on Jul 3, 2007 0:11:40 GMT
I knew that one. I personally think Dandelion's a more interesting character than Weed, beside the name of course. She seems to be more clever as well. Hopefully you'll update soon, a good short brake from a story is nice, but you'll lose a thing or two if you take one that's too long.
Now you're a full member! Too bad Soniclord isn't here to see this!
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Post by selina on Jul 3, 2007 14:34:37 GMT
Yahoo, I am a full member.
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jewelcati
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It's ok. I always get out of trouble... I blame you
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Post by jewelcati on Jul 4, 2007 20:04:33 GMT
ooh sorry... I didn't really get the first... two lines.
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Post by selina on Jul 8, 2007 22:26:47 GMT
I think I have part 14 almost thought up. It will be where Tails and Amy infiltrate one of Eggman's new bases that he put up (there is like thousands now) and meets up with Dokkun, Bokkun's newly created, smarter, missile loving, "brother", who wants to kill him but they beat his machine and he gets away, then he releases an E-series robot that Eggman never unleashed in the first episodes of Sonic X (really i made this one up) named E-82 Dragok who looks like a huge mechanical black dragon. Dokkun put the Chaos emerlad that is being held in this base inside of E-82 Dragok to power it up, so Tails has to destroy it and get the emerald. Then they find out that Eggman unleashed three new robots of the new E-200 series to destroy Sonic and the Metarex as well named E-201 Alpha Nexus, E-202 Meta Hunter, and E-203 Zenux.
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Post by selina on Jul 9, 2007 22:40:49 GMT
Here is the long awaited part 14, it will have Tails and Amy infiltrating Eggman's base for a chaos emerald. I finally figured out what to do for this part.
Part 14
Tails drove the new Blue Typhoon across to find their next Chaos Emerald. He had a new Emerald detector to help him on his search. Amy preoccupied her time by kicking around her head as if it were a hackysack ball. Cream tried eating herself and thought she tasted yummy. After some time of searching Tails detector picked up one at one of Eggman's bases. He quickly went to find it along with Amy.
Once inside, he first went to get through the outside area. It was very low on guards, but some new robots that resembled the E-21 Ballios, except with a camoflage color were thier as guards. Tails had no problem with them, especially because he had Cosmo's DNA inside of him, thier bullets only put holes in him, but could not kill him.
As soon as they got inside, they were greeted by a new robot that flew down to them. It looked like Bokkun, except for that it was white and taller than Bokkun. It said "greetings intruders, I am Dokkun, Bokkun's newly created "brother", I am here to destroy you Tails and Amy." It then continued with, "I see you are here for our Chaos Emerald, well you will have to get through me first." Just then, Dokkun got on a large biped machine with ion turrets. It came up to fire, but Tails flew out of the way and took out the machine easily. After he eradicated Dokkun's machine, Dokkun told them, you round one goes to you two, but I will look for another way to get rid of you two" then he flew off.
As they searched, they went through the huge Sub zero part of the base. This part was more guarded, for Egg Pawns of all kinds and other robots such as these new Ballios's and E-2000's were everywhere. Even so, they were still able to sneak around them, Amy had the most ease of avoiding the robots, for she could melt and look like an ordinary old pink puddle, except in the sub zero area, for she would freeze solid if she tried it in there.
As soon as his Chaos Emerald tracker began see it close, Dokkun came again. "I may have not beaten you before, but I know someone who can, his name is E-82, but you can call him Dragok, he was going to be used by Eggman, and now is his chance, Hahahahahaha." Suddenly, a huge robot came from behind him, it looked like a huge mechanical black dragon with glowing red eyes, gray wings, and silver claws and teeth that could cut through them like butter. Tails loaded the Rifle he brought along and prepared to face off against Dragok. He pounded it with bullets, but its armor was tough and he couldn't hurt it, even Amy's hammer couldn't even dent it. When Amy went for another swing, Dragok grabbed her and cut her in four. As Amy went to pick up her pieces, a plan hatched in her mind. She grabbed a knife from a dead camoflaged Ballios and yelled to Tails "Tails, cut me into tiny bits and fire them out your rifle, I could be used as bullets." So Tails began to chop her up to tiny, bite sized, bits and fired them out of his gun. Then he saw her plan, he found out another power he ganed from her mutation, the pieces all changed into tiny little Amy clones, which all swarmed over Dragok like gnats and began hitting at it with thier hammers. Tails was out of Amy ammo, so he loaded another bullet and shot right at Dragok's head. Dragok shrieked in pain. Tails thought, of course, no matter how strong Eggman's robots were, they always had some sort of weakness, and Dragok's was its head.
He told the Amys, "go for the head, that is the weak spot." Then the Amys all climbed up to Dragok's head and began whacking it there; a few managed to get in its mouth and found out that the Chaos Emerald was being held in its head. When right as they were taking it down, a spinning green ball came right through the base's walls and whammed right into Dragok, slamming it back. It was Cosmo, she molded herself into a ball and shot herself out of the Sonic Power Cannon. Rouge then came through the hole and finished Dragok with her extending legs and powerful cybotic strength. She then grabbed its Chaos Emerald and put it inside of her to power up. While they were there, they planted charges in the center of the base and set them off right as the flew out on Tails, and Rouge's back. They then got back in the Blue Typhoon and set off for the next Emerald.
Back in the ship, Tails told Amy "thank you for being there to save me, I wouldn't be able to defeat Dragok without you."
Amy told him "Aww, thanks a lot, but it was Cosmo and Rouge who helped defeat Dragok.
Then Tails said to Amy and Cream, "hey I really need something to eat after all that, could you make yourselves into a baloney and cheese sandwich?"
They told him yes and in an instant were made into one ready for Tails to eat. Tails then sat back as he enjoyed a delicious sandwich made from his friends. He did not finish them as usual because he wanted some of them to grow back from. After that he went with Cosmo to play a little game of head basketball.
Dokkun flew away with bad news for Eggman, but he knew he could get that Emerald back, for he had activated the new E-200 series robots to help him out, E-201 Alpha Nexus, E-202, Meta hunter, and E-203 Zenux.
End of part 14
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Post by destrachan on Jul 17, 2007 3:03:06 GMT
This is destrachan, selina told me since I am friends with her in real life, that I could continue this great story for her. I think it is the best fanfic on this site and I will love to see the flash animation version that she said she will post on newgrounds when it is finished. She told me what to write, I am just writing it for her since she is not here, so give all the credit to this part to selina, not me. Well here is part 15, I guess. It is where Dandelion and Weed settle thier differences with GUN and westopolis is attacked by the Metarex. Here we go, I hope I do well at telling it for selina.
Part 15
Asher flew her mech through the sky over westopolis, a city that was attacked byt the Black arms but was rebuilt shortly after. As she flew she noticed it ws under attack again, but this time by the Metarex. She saw metarex of all kinds throughout the city, slaughtering all the citizens. Metarex fighters, metarex mechs, even a few Metarex death stations were cluttered in the town. Asher knew why this was happeneing, after what she saw on some of the huge TV's on the buildings and went to tell Weed and Dandelion all about it. Asher came to where they were checking the mech's systems and said to them, "have you heard, the Metarex are going to war with Earth, and right now, if you look outside, they are attacking westopolis."
"What" dandelion exclaimed "this can't be happening, Earth doesn't know what they're up against!"
Asher told her "well it is happening and we now just have to stop them, I will dispatch you two to fight them while I take care of thier big ones in this mech here, so load up your weapons, you will have to eliminate every last one, including the 6 Metarex lords."
Weed replied to Asher "There is a problem with that, one of the metarex lords, Pale Bayleaf, or Remy as he was once called, is my brother and trained me to be the Seedrain I am now, you think I would kill my own brother?!"
Asher conforted him and said, "he is not your brother now, he is someone else, someone evil, someone who works for the worst enemy in the galaxy, Dark Oak, so if you wish to destroy the Metarex once again, and for ever, then you must."
Weed sighed and said "alright, I will, if it means being rid of the metarex once and for all, hemay be my borther, but if he is with the Metarex, then he is not friend of mine!" Then Weed and Dandelion got thier weapons and exited the mech while Dandelion flew off in it. They were greeted by Pale Bayleaf and a team of crab Metarex.
"Hello brother, it has been a long time since we last met," Pale Bayleaf greeted him with.
Weed told him, "Remy, what has gotten into you, you were my good brother a long time ago, and now you work for that cretin Dark Oak as one of his other 5 Metarex Lords, the metarex are evil and destroyed our home planet, and you want to be one of them?!"
Bayleaf answered "that was old times Weed, I am not the Seedrain you once knew me as, you should join me, for we shall rule the universe together!"
Weed replied with "No, I will never be with the Metarex, and you should not too."
Bayleaf responded with "then I will have to kill you and your friend beside you as well, you will never win, you are unlike that one who nearly ruined our empire before Cosmo, you don't have the rare Seedrain gene and neither does your friend, you have no power against us brother."
Dandelion took out her desert eagle pistol and yelled to Bayleaf "Oh yeah, well what do you call this, huh?!" Right then She shot at the crab metarex and began taking them out with help from Weed's swordplay skills. Bayleaf quickly fled from the scene as the two took out the team he had with him.
Far away, at GUN fortress, the commander of GUN watched as he saw from the screens of his monitors that showed the slaghterfest occuring at Westopolis from the Metarex as he learned they were called. He never faced a threat to earth like this, not even the Black Arms were as menacing as this. He went to broadcast a message to the any survivors, if any, to the citizens of Westopolis.
In it he appeared and said, citizens of Westopolis, these things that are attacking, or metarex as they are called, have declared war on us humans. I will have our soldiers thier to destroy these Metarex and ward them off from here. I urge all people to stay in thier homes and reamin hidden, our troopers will soon escort you all to the safe zone. Anyone who helps the Metarex out will be shot as a traitor to mankind. Dark Oak watched this all inside of his personal ship and said to himself "feeble human resistance, they shalol be dealt with rather easily."
The GUN soldiers landed a large airship and the soldiers moved out. Most of them went armed with new weapons from GUN to exterminate the small metarex soldiers while the others took pilot of thier high-tech vehicles and went to take out the larger threats. A squad of five soldiers busted down the door to a building and then got thier mission briefing saying, a message to all GUN troops, here is your mission, destroy all metarex, leave none alive, destroy all important looking items to these metarex, good luck and your new weapons may help you in this battle. A trooper said to another, "lets go, we have to check for survivors of this onslaught." The other one stopped him and told him "wait a minute, I think I heard something in that room. The first one said back "oh C'mon you are just hearing things." The second one replied with "no really, something is in there, we better keep our guards up." The first one sighed "alright, but I think that you are just getting a little nervous, that's all." The first soldier came in and said "there is nothing her......." Right then a Naga Metarex, a demonlike metarex with a snake tail instead of legs jumped on him and tore open his chest. The other soldier said "what the heck is that thing?" another trooper came and said, "it's one of those metarex, and it gonna be dead soon!" The troopers shot at it and killed it, but more Naga metarex slithered out from the shadows, and one ripped another trooper's head off. They shot at all of them, but a few more came. The one trooper yelled "fire in the hole," and threw a grenade, blowing up the rest then said in triumph "hahaha, that is what you get when you mess with GUN."
He was interrupted with Dandelion and Weed coming up from behind them and holding thier pistols up to the soldier's heads. The one soldier said as soon as she did this, "wha who are you two?"
Dandelion told him "you might remember me, your troopers locked me and my friend here up in that prison compound that was destroyed not too long ago.
The soldier then relplied with "oh I remember you from the datalog, you two were unknown extraterrestrial plant lifeforms #1 and #2, we didn't know what you two were, so we were going to run tests and experiment on you two, but you escaped."
Weed said, "we may have been unknown aliens at the time, but believe you me when I say I am not your enemy."
The soldier answered "that can't be, you're one of them, how van we trust you?"
Weed told him "well We haven't killed any of you, yet, so it that enough?"
the other soldier told his partner "it has a point there, maybe we should trust it." The soldier said back to the one that just spoke, "are you out of your mind, they are alien plant life forms, I mean just look at it, do you really want to put your faith in a talking flower?"
Weed said to the soldier "well you were going to experiment on us, so maybe we shouldn't trust you humans, I sould just pull the trigger and wasye you three, or you could put down your weapons, then I will put down mine, and we will tell you some important information about these metarex."
The soldier put down his gun and then Weed and Dandelion put down thier's. The soldier said to Weed "You shouldn't be doing this."
Dandelion told the soldier's, we can't explain anything now, but we'll tell you later, we want rid of the metarex as much as you do.
The soldier then told her, "we have developed a new type of rifle that has proved to be very effective at harming these metarex." Weed and dandelion both armed themselves with one and they all stepped out of the building. The soldier then told them "we will get a transport right away so you can report what you know to our commander, you may know something important in taking these things down, your may be our ally, but I doubt the other troopers will know this."
Dandelion loaded her rifle and said "that's thier problem."
End of part 15
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