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Post by sylar on Nov 24, 2010 7:21:11 GMT
I am stuck with my story New face of evil. I cant think of a perfect way to hurt Amy or Tails in away that would make Sonic want to kill my villain Lou. I dont want them to die or be raped, I had the idea of Lou try and turn Tails insane but... I dont know. Lay some ideas on the botttom
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lukethearchmage
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Post by lukethearchmage on Nov 24, 2010 21:27:38 GMT
Okay, here's an Idea. You know how black narcasisuss, in season 3 of sonic x, trapped chris and cosmo and made sonic become filled with rage. Your villan could do something smillar to provoke sonic.
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Nov 25, 2010 4:15:19 GMT
I'm thinking something involving electrocution. That might evoke Sonic's rage.
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sylar
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Post by sylar on Nov 25, 2010 7:47:42 GMT
I like both ideas, how about them in a glass dome an he watches them be electrocuted.
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Post by XT-421 on Nov 25, 2010 14:58:35 GMT
Sounds sinister enough, lol. One quick question to get you thinking: Why are they being tortured?
~Joe
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sylar
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Post by sylar on Nov 25, 2010 18:56:29 GMT
The reason they are being tortured us because Sonic cares for them. Lou my villan is trying make Sonic do something so terrible it will shatter his image of being the symbol of peace
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Post by Twilitbeing on Nov 29, 2010 2:39:11 GMT
From what I can gather, it seems that Lou's goal is to make Sonic commit some atrocity. (Why he would want to do this is a question I can ignore for the moment.) Unless he's willing to provoke Dark Super Sonic and virtually guarantee his own death, engineering said atrocity is probably his best option. In general terms, Lou could set up some kind of catastrophe and some kind of deathtrap, rigging one to go off when the other is disrupted.
To make up an example on the spot: Suppose Lou designs a machine specifically for combat with one of Tails' planes (not unlike a scenario at the very end of the anime's second season), making it ostensibly nuclear-powered. As a finishing touch, he makes it look like Eggman's work. Sonic comes to Tails' aid and destroys the mech, never suspecting it was carrying a few kilotons of nuclear explosive. Needless to say, people will feel the shock wave. (Of course, a regular chemical bomb may be enough; collateral damage is what matters.)
I don't expect that exact situation to fit your needs, but I hope it helps. Best of luck.
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Post by XT-421 on Nov 29, 2010 3:40:57 GMT
I think I get what Twilit's saying.. that is impressive... Or perhaps make a scenario where Sonic is framed for something? (I think that is what you were getting at Twilit, but, I think I have a slightly different idea...)
There has been one scenario where Sonic has been wrongly accused for crimes that I immediately know of, SA2B, Shadow the Hedgehog.
You could create a visage of Sonic doing bad and terrible things, and have Sonic missing that night such that his friends' only belief in him is the old Sonic they know.
Idk, I lost my train of thought...
~Joe
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sylar
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Post by sylar on Nov 29, 2010 5:34:29 GMT
I came up with the idea of having 2 domes and each one has a button on it, Sonic but push the button o n the opposet dome to make the one inside be safe from pain while the other is electorcuted ( He is be seeing the one inside the dome before him dying.) I think that is a really cruel thing to do to someone.)
Twilit that is a very impressive idea and the reason for Lou provoking sonic is because he wants Sonic to kill him. Sonic is a symbol of hope and peace, what would happen if the most friendly hedgehog you knew commeted murder. His image would be shattered. Lou also wants to prove if you kill the main threat sooner you will save alot more lives. Reason why Lou is so cold is because his city was flooded by Chaos 7 and his mother died in his arms when he was very young and the whole thing messed him up pretty good if you know what I mean. Dont get me wrong I have him some humor and I try to show he has a soft side so readers can feel sorry for him.
Now if you guys can think of anything that is more terrible then seeing Tails and Amy being tortured let me know. I dont want no rape lol
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Post by Twilitbeing on Nov 29, 2010 5:53:20 GMT
My first instinct was to ask, "Why would Sonic go along with that, rather than spinballing through the wall, knocking out the power, saving the hostages, and generally wrecking the entire plan?"
Of course, Lou might predict this response and plan around it... perhaps making it impossible to shut off the device without killing him... thus turning a likely cause of failure into another form of success. This might be workable. (TV Tropes Wiki calls that a Xanatos Gambit.)
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sylar
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Post by sylar on Nov 29, 2010 21:36:39 GMT
I was going to have sonic break the glass but tails is badly hurt making sonic finally go rage on Lou and they get in a fight now just have to choose what sonic will do
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Post by miyafox on Dec 14, 2010 22:16:33 GMT
MAKE TAILS EVIL TAILS I HAVE BEEN DIEING TO SEE THAT HAPPEN
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Nick
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Post by Nick on Dec 17, 2010 8:37:33 GMT
And Dark Tails is annoying as hell and you need the hammer to kill him.
Goldstein!!!1
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